Sunday, December 4, 2011

The magic dress

Ones upon a time there was a girl named Jackie.  Jackie lived in a castle, that  her mum did not allow Jackie  to  come out of. Every day her mum would come to see her. One day her mum came with a magic dress.
As soon as Jackie put her dress on she flew outside,when Jackie landed as soon as she took 10 steps away  from her tower  a troll  appeared out of no where!!  Jackie ran as fast as she could to her tower. but  Jackie was not in time the troll picked Jackie up and took her magic dress"Finlay  "Jackie's  mum  came  and got  the  dress and kicked the troll" in the" shins OOOOHHHH!!!  and Jackie her mum ran back to her  tower  Jackie's  mum gave her dress to her once they got inside.          

THE END                   

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